Are you joining? Also, I was talking about the one labelled as "MOVEBASE". I don't know how to record voices. Try asking SimΞon or asking people on SmileBASIC Source.
It seems a bit too.. eh.. generic. It sounds like the story of an edgy low-budget action film from the early 2000s. No offense. We may need to add "Storyboard Artist" to the list of viable roles in the team.
This is why you should make an original project with SB. If you ever published it, it would be deleted for copyright issues.
Next time, make an original idea. I'm glad that this happened. :)
It looks kind of all over the place. In my opinion, the point of the bottom screen is to display the important information. It kind of defeats the purpose. And I know you have other things located there, but still.