do you think this is a good info screen?(the sprite is animated)

I personally prefer white on a black background. Easier for my eyes.

Games usually abbreviate "critical hit rate" as just "CRIT". No need to type it all out, and it's easier to understand.

Better than me, though.

Ok I will use crit.black gives a more depressing feeling if you know what I maen.

Now that you mention it...

is this better?

Why not make bg sprites for that?

For what?

your screens