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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I have school today ;-; No worries I guess?
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I mainly would want to join because then I can mention stuff that would get me banned if I said so it on Miiverse, like URLs.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@Aaron Oh sorry there! I kinda forgot about this discussion after I gave feedback to pickachu. Anyway, your sprites are really detailed, I'm liking them. I think you could add a bit more shading to the top of the larger ships, but if your light source doesn't agree with that, than it's fine.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I fixed all of the yellow garbage around the mascot head sprites. Please let me know if you'd like the key.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I might join SBS if that's helpful in any way.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@Pikachu I like the simplistic look of your sprites, but they seem a little too bright. I'd recommend you find some not as bright colors that are still the same color, just a different shade.
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@∞D©IPHER∞ your second post is really nice! The miiverse jpeg screenshots kinda prevent me from looking really closely, but from what I can tell they're greeeeeeat! (part of a complete breakfast)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I might tweak a few things (like palette and a few details), but other than that I think I did a good job.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
Alas, the Glock17 is done!
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
??? (wip)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
My PC broke, it might still work but anyway I'm going to get to doing that gun tonight
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@∞D©IPHER∞ Your first set of sprites are really great. I would recommend that you add a bit more detail to the tree sprites, and make the letter h in the shop sprite uppercase.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@random guy Your sprites are nice, but the green doesn't match up well with the red. I'd recommend you find a color that works better.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
Ughh I really need to work on the gun sprites but Rpg maker is way too addicting. expect a new gun tonight.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
Just so everyone knows, I changed my Mii to red.
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Clumsy me, I forgot the screenshot! Here it is.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro

Get Sprite Feedback From Jack.ase!

I make Sprites, and people like them. I'm currently working on sprites for The Afterwar. So now I'm open to give people feedback on their Sprites, and Pixel Art too! Rules: -See the above screenshot before commenting -Screenshots are required -No joke comments (memes, purposely bad drawings, etc.)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
;)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
Pixel art contest!
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
I think you could make the r a crane.
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