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Jack.ase TopmanRetro

Get Sprite Feedback From Jack.ase!

I make Sprites, and people like them. I'm currently working on sprites for The Afterwar. So now I'm open to give people feedback on their Sprites, and Pixel Art too! Rules: -See the above screenshot before commenting -Screenshots are required -No joke comments (memes, purposely bad drawings, etc.)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
Clumsy me, I forgot the screenshot! Here it is.
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Random guy spncrjhn
don't worry. I do it all the time!
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Random guy spncrjhn
hares my dragon. (and corrupted form). also, dont mind other things please.
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*J.P.* DEV NEWPICY3
here is most of the sprites i have made excluding the tank and titles like words or pictures. if this is what you mean..
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*J.P.* DEV NEWPICY3
buuut.. since i cant put the cool memes i found (GGG's ones), ill also put IW2 title too.
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Pikachu Squi-Volt
I can't do advanced shading, but they're in the top area.
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Aaron Krondelo
My two ship designs, the top one isn't finished but it's getting there. I still need more ship designs if you want/could help!
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@random guy Your sprites are nice, but the green doesn't match up well with the red. I'd recommend you find a color that works better.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@∞D©IPHER∞ Your first set of sprites are really great. I would recommend that you add a bit more detail to the tree sprites, and make the letter h in the shop sprite uppercase.
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Random guy spncrjhn
@jack.ase, the green is corruption, its not supposed to be the best.
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@∞D©IPHER∞ your second post is really nice! The miiverse jpeg screenshots kinda prevent me from looking really closely, but from what I can tell they're greeeeeeat! (part of a complete breakfast)
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@Pikachu I like the simplistic look of your sprites, but they seem a little too bright. I'd recommend you find some not as bright colors that are still the same color, just a different shade.
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Aaron Krondelo
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Jack.ase TopmanRetro
@Aaron Oh sorry there! I kinda forgot about this discussion after I gave feedback to pickachu. Anyway, your sprites are really detailed, I'm liking them. I think you could add a bit more shading to the top of the larger ships, but if your light source doesn't agree with that, than it's fine.
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Random guy spncrjhn
heres my sprites for a btd like game im working on with ∞D©ifer∞(sorry if i spelled name wrong). But the top is towers, the bottom is arrows, and between are the evil flashlights.
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Random guy spncrjhn
@∞D©IPHER∞, are you making a terraria like game? according to your sprites, you probably are. I love terraria!
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*J.P.* DEV NEWPICY3
its more of an island survival game but i guess it does relate to terraria in many ways. hopefully tonight i can fix most of my stuff on it. also ok thanks.
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Aaron Krondelo
Thanks Jack! It's okay, appreciate the feedback!
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PChicken NerdChicken
wohohoho so late but pls rate
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