for the game Afterwar, we need a story line. J.P already made one a while back but I'm makin this for two reasons, 1: I forgot most of his story (...yeah) 2: we could use someone to change it up if they want as J.P said it could use some changes (... I think... yeah...) So any ideas to put in the beginning story/prologue of the game will be appreciated.

what was the original story about?

This was all I could find from @Quote on one of J.P's older posts "August 16,2178 "The nuclear bombs have been dropped and decimated nearly everything on this continent. My people in this community strive for victory in this war... But, something has occurred. The nuclear bombs have completely modified those who were just outside of it's blast area, turning them --" there is more.

The rest of it: "-- into beasts with no soul at all. The geologists have found the enemies making and releasing these creatures into the world, and the commotion is making huge seismic waves all across the globe. If someone doesn't stop this, I will." Your's truly, Clayton Hill" And that's it. Anything you think would make it better?

J.P made a post about the game where the earths crust shattered and the people on earth had to go to space to escape the danger but i couldn't find that post.

"July 13, 2176 A war is going on between the (name) and the (name) because of the lilyary witch is an item of ultimate power, enough do destroy a whole universe. As the war goes on, lazers and explosions can be seen from civilization, some even think the war can be driven to their city. Time passes, and the (name) are planning something big. If they get a powerful enough "more

"bomb, they can destroy the whole (name). Then they get the lilyary! Only then can they control the whole universe! So in August, they fired the bomb. The plane driver, of course, died. The explosion was so big, if you were over the middle, you couldn't see the edges. Even if you were 5 miles over it you couldn't se the edges! if you were 5 miles over it you would probably be in " theres more

space! Most of civilization got corrupted, and turned into zombies.

test storyline 2.0 coming soon (in like 1 or 2 hours or less or more depending on my time) will be great.

oops i only have two posts (1 now) so ima have to do it tomorrow. anyways just saying.

Lol, I just realized I quoted quote.

hahahahaha! lol thats really funny..

Anyways, you had a story outline?

yes i am just reviewing details with various friends and family before posting it.

Sounds professional.

well i want to make sure its something good or right/ready. my friend and i decided to use various things from our upcoming movie called EVΞRLAST. in basic form it is about us finding another planet and because of earths crippled atmosphere that over the years got much worse we are using this other planet to make a 2nd planet in the case of earth getting so bad. then a virus is found later, it

I thought EVΞRLAST was a game you were making on sb.

it is determined that its not a new one its everywhere, on every planet we have gone to, even earth, basically it cant do anything anywhere else cause of the distance from or to the sun. but the new planet is different and it can do anything, it is named the Everlast Virus because of it being everywhere. anyways. i wont give any more, but thats not what im doing for this game.

oh it was a game, but uh it dident work out.. i only finished the first bit then realized my flaws and it was too late lol.

Wait, so those two comments don't have anything to do with afterwar?

well a little bit but not too much, what do you think of what i just told, tell me that first.

lol I'm confused about what is the story and what's not. But from what I saw, it looks good, I'm just not sure how we're going to put it in the game.

well later in the story basically we are transported to the base alkabarri (al-kuh-bar-e) oops gotta go eat brb.

anyways but basically after a while we (us and some other firends) get tired of being bossed around on the base and plan a night escape, just like a day off, but when we do this as soon as were out of the outer gates the base is suddenly blown to bitz. we put together that we think it was an attack from Russian military as they were not happy about our taking the planet. we quickly escape to a

2ndary base with the transport ship we escaped in, at first they dont believe us that the base was gone but after sending drones to check out what we said they find that it was true. we go to investigate as to what happened. *dun dun dun* "what will happen?!" find out next time after you tell me how it is.

Sounds good! I can picture this in the game. go on, I want know the rest lol.

Sounds good!

hmm I will but the other story is much better JSYK. busy now but my sis is gonna sleep in my tent tonight so we'll be working on it a lot.

Wait, you made two stories?

ummm... well one is for a movie and one for our game. anyways my sis and me came up with some great ideas.

Oooooohhhh, those story comments were for your movie. Gotcha, I'll be waiting.

Umm, this probably looks awkward for other people again... you never saw this other peoples... jkjk we discussed the story on SBS. So Ima close this now.