Here's the menu for my first game.

Is it a finished game? Or you just started with a menu and it's not playable?

It's mostly just a menu. The game part of it is a work in progress.

Here's my name for Smile Basic, "Strata-G Games"

Really, you should make the game part of it before doing anything fancy

Yeah, I know. That's what my brother keeps telling me... but now I'm working on the game and nothing else.

I know it's a better idea to make the game first, then the menu, but have to admit, the menu looks great.

Really!? Thanks!

Here's the first part of the game. There's a lot more that's already done. Sorry if anyone is upset with how it looks, but it's my first game and I'm a noob.

So it's one of those pick-an-answer games. The sentence "Who are you" needs a '?' mark, not '.'

No, I mean, one of the choices is Who are you. It should be Who are you?

Yeah, you try to not get kidnapped. Different paths should have different outcomes. Thanks for pointing that out to me! I can't believe I didn't notice that I used the wrong puncuation.

It's OK. I took extra grammar in previous years of school so I'm extra critical about that. Sorry.

You can also make your own name, but it's limited to only ten characters. So if you type "1234567890123" it's going to show up as "123456789"

It's okay, I don't want incorrect grammar in my game.

I'mlooking foward to it!

Yay!

I dont even have SmileBASIC, but now from YOUR inspiration, I have to get SmileBASIC. But I don't have an eShop card. I'm looking forward to buying SmileBASIC! By the way, your game looks FANTASTIC already!

Thanks, I know someone that's colorblind, and they couldn't read the text so here's the new colors. I made the background darker and changed the text from red to a light grey.

The new text.

Please, criticise me. Tell me what needs to be changed. Be honest. Be as nice or mean as you need to be.

It would be pretty cool if you added in some sprites and animations for the different Endings/Questions. (Kinda like little Cutscenes).

It would also be cool if you could select your character. Then, the character you chose could show up on the bottom screen during questions. Though, that may be a bit difficult to do.

Thanks for the suggestions. I've thought about that, and might add it later.

There will be a mini game at the end of some paths.

I finally HAVE SmileBASIC! Its amazing!